Comments on: The piano http://connor.shepeaustow.net/2008/05/08/the-piano/ ...and his stuff Fri, 21 Nov 2008 23:57:03 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 By: Edward.k http://connor.shepeaustow.net/2008/05/08/the-piano/#comment-46 Edward.k Thu, 05 Jun 2008 12:19:09 +0000 http://connor.shepeaustow.net/2008/05/08/the-piano/#comment-46 I like the way you made your piece more effective, your writing is very intresting. I like the way you made your piece more effective, your writing is very intresting.

]]> By: Callum.J http://connor.shepeaustow.net/2008/05/08/the-piano/#comment-42 Callum.J Thu, 05 Jun 2008 10:55:29 +0000 http://connor.shepeaustow.net/2008/05/08/the-piano/#comment-42 like I said on frasers blog I wasn`t here when you wrote them. like I said on frasers blog I wasn`t here when you wrote them.

]]> By: Joe and Jake http://connor.shepeaustow.net/2008/05/08/the-piano/#comment-41 Joe and Jake Thu, 05 Jun 2008 10:50:52 +0000 http://connor.shepeaustow.net/2008/05/08/the-piano/#comment-41 We like your writing it shows real compassion. good job connor We like your writing it shows real compassion. good job connor

]]> By: connor http://connor.shepeaustow.net/2008/05/08/the-piano/#comment-30 connor Thu, 05 Jun 2008 10:31:21 +0000 http://connor.shepeaustow.net/2008/05/08/the-piano/#comment-30 Thankyou for all your great comments, I am so glad that you like it, I was hoping you would feel the ways you do! Thankyou for all your great comments, I am so glad that you like it, I was hoping you would feel the ways you do!

]]> By: Madeleine http://connor.shepeaustow.net/2008/05/08/the-piano/#comment-29 Madeleine Thu, 05 Jun 2008 03:56:36 +0000 http://connor.shepeaustow.net/2008/05/08/the-piano/#comment-29 That is a very emotional piece! I have some close friends, and I can't even imagine losing them. This year we are all going off to seperate high schools, but that is nothing compared to the death of a loved one.... The piece is very descriptive, and you can feel the anger and sadness in the narrators voice! Nice job! ~Madeleine That is a very emotional piece! I have some close friends, and I can’t even imagine losing them. This year we are all going off to seperate high schools, but that is nothing compared to the death of a loved one…. The piece is very descriptive, and you can feel the anger and sadness in the narrators voice! Nice job!
~Madeleine

]]> By: Anna http://connor.shepeaustow.net/2008/05/08/the-piano/#comment-25 Anna Tue, 27 May 2008 20:33:31 +0000 http://connor.shepeaustow.net/2008/05/08/the-piano/#comment-25 I love this piece. The emotion portrayed in this piece is wonderful. I enjoy the sadness and curiosity that is acted out and the imagery is very intricate. Good Job! I love this piece. The emotion portrayed in this piece is wonderful. I enjoy the sadness and curiosity that is acted out and the imagery is very intricate. Good Job!

]]> By: Brian Smith http://connor.shepeaustow.net/2008/05/08/the-piano/#comment-22 Brian Smith Sun, 11 May 2008 09:43:35 +0000 http://connor.shepeaustow.net/2008/05/08/the-piano/#comment-22 I enjoyed reading your piece about the piano but I didn't understand it because I haven't seen the film. I'm glad you added that it was a film you'd watched in Literacy or I'd have felt very worried because it seemed that someone realy had died. Your description of the tears is very good. Have you read Fraser's blog about the same film? He's written several paragraphs about several incidents in the film. And Leia begins with a description of the film and when and why you watched it. That helped me understand. Your blog is becoming a very long and interesting place. It has lots of entries about a range of different subjects Very well done. I enjoyed reading your piece about the piano but I didn’t understand it because I haven’t seen the film. I’m glad you added that it was a film you’d watched in Literacy or I’d have felt very worried because it seemed that someone realy had died.

Your description of the tears is very good.

Have you read Fraser’s blog about the same film? He’s written several paragraphs about several incidents in the film. And Leia begins with a description of the film and when and why you watched it. That helped me understand.

Your blog is becoming a very long and interesting place. It has lots of entries about a range of different subjects Very well done.

]]> By: Mr Jones http://connor.shepeaustow.net/2008/05/08/the-piano/#comment-21 Mr Jones Sat, 10 May 2008 06:02:06 +0000 http://connor.shepeaustow.net/2008/05/08/the-piano/#comment-21 Connor, I really like your story. It tells me about your friend's way of supporting you and how you supported your friend. It tells me how much you will miss them. You have used some great adjectives to describe your tears. I wonder what your friend was saying thank you for? Can you imagine? Keep up the great work. I'll visit back soon to see what you have written. Connor, I really like your story. It tells me about your friend’s way of supporting you and how you supported your friend. It tells me how much you will miss them. You have used some great adjectives to describe your tears.

I wonder what your friend was saying thank you for? Can you imagine?

Keep up the great work. I’ll visit back soon to see what you have written.

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